It has recently come to my attention that we are swimming in the middle of National Poetry Month. Who decides these things? Who thought it would be cute to have National Poetry Month and National Physics Day, or Week, or Month, or whatever, overlap? I don’t know.
At first, I had a mad urge to post my own work. But I think you’ve probably had about enough of that. So instead, I will post a poem by my favorite poet, and I hope others will do the same (or contribute their own work) (or do both at once and bear the name of egotist).
A Refusal to Mourn the Death, by Fire, of a Child in London
Dylan ThomasNever until the mankind making
Bird beast and flower
Fathering and all humbling darkness
Tells with silence the last light breaking
And the still hour
Is come of the sea tumbling in harnessAnd I must enter again the round
Zion of the water bead
And the synagogue of the ear of corn
Shall I let pray the shadow of a sound
Or sow my salt seed
In the least valley of sackcloth to mournThe majesty and burning of the child’s death.
I shall not murder
The mankind of her going with a grave truth
Nor blaspheme down the stations of the breath
With any further
Elegy of innocence and youth.Deep with the first dead lies London’s daughter,
Robed in the long friends,
The grains beyond age, the dark veins of her mother,
Secret by the unmourning water
Of the riding Thames.
After the first death, there is no other.Most recent Copyright 1967 the Trustees for the Copyrights of Dylan Thomas, used without permission don’t hurt me please I don’t have any money.
I think that poem was one of the first ones I ever analyzed, in 8th grade. It gave me a strange feeling, like I was wading out of water, each movement made stately by the weight of water in my clothes and hair; like I had been crying and had found the calm at the bottom of all my tears.
It was the poem I used in Beginning Poetry in college for the Oulipo (the literary equivalent of Dadaist) exercise ‘N-7’...you replace each noun with one seven nouns down in the dictionary. My professor had us read out the results, and say whether we thought it was still poetry. It definitely was.
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An all time favorite
A tie for first is The Highway Man by Alfred Noyes, which many may recall from the musical version Loreena McKennitt did a couple of years back.
My personal favorite
Liljen og Dugdraaben by A.W. Schack von Staffeldt.
The following is my attempt at an English translation. I’m sure it could be done better, but here goes:
Re: An all time favorite
Ha! That is a silly poeem ;)
And I remember The Highway Man from Anne of Green Gables...well, the quite decent movie they made of it, anyway. :) I think it was another poem she elocuted in the book on that occasion… Loreena and Anne often have similar taste in poetry!
Re: My personal favorite
Wow…that translation must have taken you a while! And, whilst of course I can’t know anything about the original, it certainly comes across very well.
Interesting. I generally associate the personification of animals, plants and elements with fables and moralizing poems; but if there’s a moral there, it’s a bit obscure, and not trumpeted in couplet form as a fable would do.
Re: My personal favorite
I believe it was meant to illustrate the conflict between mortal flesh and an eternal soul – the duality of our being in the traditional Christian belief system, which the author was obviously emersed in.
If there is a morale, it must be the transient nature of “the matter that binds us to this Earth” and an offering of consolation in the concept that a part of us is, after all, eternal and carries on its being elsewhere.
The religious message is not the reason I like it, though. Rather, I’m intrigued by the vivid beauty of the imagery evoked by the author.
Re: An all time favorite
I actually am most familiar with The Highway Man because my sixth grade teacher was fond of reading it to the class, along with other quality poetry that I paid less attention too.
Book Lice!
Dude! I read Book Lice with my girlfriend during her Childern’s Literature class last semester. It rocks! That’s how you do repetition in a poem.
Re: Book Lice!
Does it make anyone else automatically think of Philip Glass buying a loaf of bread?
Still April
Stupid broken computers. So, I’m an attention whore who thinks he knows something about a subject he sorta majored in, even if he hasn’t written any decent poetry in like 4 years! But I digress. Here’s a little something of my own, then I’m going to find you some really good stuff by a really good poet.
Re: Still April
I think this remains my all time favourite poem, past a few other classes on poetry. This is from his 1973 book, Field Guide, which remains one of my favourite books of poetry, despite many wordy attempted coups by Michael Ondaatje and Mary Jo Bang.