Comments on "The Dialogue Trap" - Faerye Net 2008-09-04T22:00:05+00:00 re: Dialogue 2008-09-04T22:00:05+00:00 2008-09-04T22:00:05+00:00 <p>Sometimes characters are assholes, too. I mean, how does Joss Whedon live with himself after writing those things Angelus says? :P But yes, I hate it when I can&#8217;t tell who is speaking because everyone speaks the same.</p> <p>Or when a book is well-written, but the editors mess up the line breaks. &#8220;Wait, why is Stephen talking like Jack? Wait, why is Stephen talking like Jack and addressing himself! DAMN YOU W.W. NORTON!&#8221;</p> Felicity Dialogue 2008-09-03T22:22:03+00:00 2008-09-03T22:22:03+00:00 <p>Dialogue is fun for me to play with too. What&#8217;s weird is that in a way you have to work to write dialogue that you yourself would never say &#8211; you have to stay in character, for each character. I hate it when all the characters is a story talk the same exact way.</p> Jeannine Hall Gailey