Comments on "Grey City XVIII" - Faerye Net 2008-08-11T15:36:10+00:00 re: Yeah! Grey City 2008-08-11T15:36:10+00:00 2008-08-11T15:36:10+00:00 <p>P.S. I am guesstimating it&#8217;ll go to 25 parts, but a grain of salt is advised.</p> Felicity re: Yeah! Grey City 2008-08-11T15:34:43+00:00 2008-08-11T15:34:43+00:00 <p>You know, I stumbled over that when I did my out-loud reading (a good way to polish one&#8217;s prose) but I didn&#8217;t trust my gut. I think you&#8217;re right.</p> <p>I&#8217;ll go mind-police it to a different word.</p> Felicity Yeah! Grey City 2008-08-11T14:53:09+00:00 2008-08-11T14:53:09+00:00 <p>Seems an interesting turn, I had expected you to be winding down slowly, not ratcheting back up.</p> <p>For what little it&#8217;s worth, this seemed a little jarring to be coming in the thoughts of young Erian, &#8220;unknown part of this inimical city.&#8221;</p> Novel